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Post by Maxx Myst on Aug 13, 2008 3:47:27 GMT
Maxx finally got out of Route 1 after being chased by who knows how many pokemon but that doesn't matter now cause he is finally here. He walked up to the welcome mat in front of the Pokemon Laboratory. He wiped the dirt off his shoes and knocked on the door. "Knock knock," The emo boy said. The teenager was wearing black pants with happy faces almost everywhere, a yellow shirt that says: "Don't get mad, get glad!" Anyways, he is standing in front of the door. [/color] |
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Post by Nishrocks on Aug 13, 2008 19:23:54 GMT
OoC: Use the Past Tense please.
The door opened dramatically, to reveal a Flygon, who, shook her head apologetically.
"Are you a new trainer? I'm Anu, one of Professor Sander's pokemon. He's not here at the moment, but he foretold your arrival. It's wierd how he can do that. Houndour, right? He didn't say whether you wanted normal, shiny, shadow or rainbow, so you'll have to tell me. I've got a Starter Pack here though!:
Anu handed Maxx his pack, and rushed off, to reveal four pokeballs.
"So, what'll it be?"
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Post by Maxx Myst on Aug 13, 2008 22:48:04 GMT
((OOC: Third-person is past tense or what are you looking for?))
Maxx almost jumped when the door opened in front of him and then a Flygon stood in front of the teenager. The Flygon was a bit tall her than him by pretty close to a foot. "Um.... yeah I am a new trainer, nice to meet you Anu! I know that is weird isn't it?" He paused about how the Professor can foretell things like his arrival. "Yes, I did wanted a Houndour."
Maxx grabbed the Starter Pack and started to look inside. After that he realized that the boy wasn't pacific enough for the Professor. "I live near the Rainbow Shrines so I don't think that I want a rainbow pokemon for a while. I never heard about Shadow pokemon, it's either that I forgot or I don't watch a lot of TV, I'll go with shadow," Maxx said. "Just out of curiosity, what does a shiny Hourdour looks like?" The teenager asked. [/sub][/color] |
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Post by Nishrocks on Aug 14, 2008 11:39:29 GMT
((OoC: Example - "He paused about how the professor can foretell things like his arrival" Can is the present tense. Could is the past. It's already happened. Third person is saying someone did something, but it can equally be someone does something, or someone will do something. You need to talk as though it's already happened.))
"A shiny Houndour is blue instead of black, and a shadow houndour is all black except for the eyes." said the Flygon, zipping up to get a poster labelled "Houndour", showing the four regular forms.
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Post by Maxx Myst on Aug 14, 2008 23:10:05 GMT
((OOC: Ok I'll try that but it wont be a that I'll get it right all the time cause I'm use to typing in third-person. I hope this is good. ))
"I guess I'll go with the shiny Houndour," said the teenager. He checked to see if there was everything that there was suppose to be in starter pack. Maxx remembered that Anu said that he or she was going to get the pokeballs after he chooses what kind of Houndour that get to choose. "Do you want me to come in or are you good?" asked Maxx, just in case that there was trouble or really just wanted to help.
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Post by Nishrocks on Aug 18, 2008 7:46:03 GMT
<No, I'm okay,> said the Flygon, returning with a single pokeball.  Level 5: Moves: Leer, Ember, Smog Ability: Early Bird Gender: () Persona:() [/center] |
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Post by Maxx Myst on Aug 19, 2008 2:09:53 GMT
Level 5: Moves: Leer, Ember, Smog Ability: Early Bird Gender: (Female) Personality:(Calm) Maxx took the pokeball that had the shiny houndour inside. "So, that'll be it?" Asked the emo kid. He just wanted to make sure that that was everything that the teenager needed before leaving. [/sub][/blockquote] |
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Post by PBK on Aug 19, 2008 3:45:09 GMT
"Just take a starter pack on your way out. Everything you'll need is in there." |
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